In the unit one assignment one thing I did well in is being able to be descriptive and use dialogue. When writing it makes the story more interesting and more imaginable when you use those two things in your writing. The main point of unit one was to show people that education is a serious thing and we have to keep students engaged and informed about education. My audience was students, teachers, and the education system. I feel like this would be a good audience because no only are they are apart of the education system, but they have the power and voice to do something about the problems the education system has. I wasn’t really confused with any parts of this unit because I understood what I was doing but I was more worried if it would be a good paper or not. Some details that I could have added in my writing was more quotes and be more detailed in parts where I was explaining when I would skip class. I think I did a good job and I didn’t have to take anything out of my assignment of unit one. Maybe I could have added more sequences in my writing to make it flow a lot more better.