1. I think that talking about how everything with me and baseball was a good thing.
  2. The main point is to show how life makes you go up and down, when I was in D.R. I couldn’t play baseball, in the U.S. I was able but then COVID.
  3. My audience is students that think that they don’t have the opportunity to play sports now or do something they like.
  4.  I the last part because it like doesn’t connect with the main point.
  5. Because it doesn’t make seen to have that I’m going to take it off.
  6.  I’m going to add more in the part where I’m going to the park with my dad.
  7. I will say in the last part why I’m taking it off. And where it says “there’s where my story begins”. that doesn’t look good in the middle of the article.