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7 point of peer review for personal narrative essay (I had to do it for my own narrative essay since my partner wasn't here)

1. Opener

• Uses quote and has an attention getter

 

2. Thesis 3 sub topics

• There are all 3 sub topics for each paragraph.
• Thesis is strong and clear.
• It’s easy to know what the essay is going to be about.

 

3. Paragraphs for subtopics and topic sentence for each

• Each paragraph mentions the sub topic in the first sentence making it easy to know what each paragraph is going to be about.

 

4. Transitional words/phrases

• Smooth transitions into the next paragraph.
• Easily connecting the paragraphs onto the conclusion.

 

5. References

• A quote is used in the introduction to grab the reader’s attention

 

6. Grammar and conventions

• Grammar is good but could maybe spice it up with a few challenging words

 

7. Conclusion

• Conclusion is clear and it mentions all three sub topics and main topic.
• It’s easily transitioned from the third body paragraph.