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Jaheim,
Glad you replied so quickly.
There are things to know, to do better:
The second grouping of quotes have no authors; thus, they are incomplete!There’s no place like home” is from The Wizard of Oz
It is better to say the character and the film, ex. –Obi-Wan Kenobi, Star Wars
–Dorothy, The Wizard of OzI doubt Walt Disney said that, but you could say, —Walt Disney’s Meet the Robinsons
A) 1. “When you want the real deal, like a good neighbor, State Farm is there.” – State Farm commercial
2. It’s alive! It’s alive!” – Frankenstein movie Well, there are so many of these movies, it would be better to write down the year in parenthesis and to underline or italicize the movie’s name.
B) Money: “An investment in knowledge pays the best interest.” -Benjamin Franklin
Work: “I never took a day off in my twenties.” – Bill Gates
Children: “Children are our most valuable resource.” – Herbert Hoover
Marriage: “When a man opens a car door for his wife, it’s either a new car or a new wife.” – Prince Philip
Religion: “My concern is not whether God is on our side; my greatest concern is to be on God’s side, for God is always right.” – Abraham Lincoln
C) “Folks are usually about as happy as they make their minds up to be.” – Abraham lincoln
“My biggest weakness is my sensitivity. I am too sensitive a person.” – Mike Tyson
“Love is the flower you’ve got to let grow.” – John Lennon
“Fear is stupid. So are regrets.” – Marilyn Monroe
“Happiness is when what you think, what you say, and what you do are in harmony.” – Mahatma GandhiThese are all very good choices. Please use a dash before the source’s name, not just a hyphen,
A). 1. John 15:13-“Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one’s life for one’s friends.” The source goes last.
2.”May the Force be with you.” – Star Wars, 1977 I’d add the speaker’s name and then italicize or underline the movie title.B). 1. “The rich invest their money and spend what is left; the poor spend their money and invest what is left.”
2. “Hard work beats talent when talent doesn’t work hard.” -Tim Notke, coach. What sport? What team?
These next three are not good enough without sources. Sources add credibility.
3. “The soul is healed by being with children”
4. “The highest happiness on earth is the happiness of marriage.”
5. “To be a Christian without prayer is no more possible than to be alive without breathing.”C). 1.“Folks are usually about as happy as they make their minds up to be.” – Abraham lincoln
2.“My biggest weakness is my sensitivity. I am too sensitive a person.” – Mike Tyson
3.“All you need is love.” – John Lennon
4.“I don’t stop when I’m tired, I stop when I’m done.” –Marilyn Monroe
Aren’t you missing someone? There should be five.A)
1) “its over Anakin I have the high ground”-star wars revenged of the sith Incorrect grammar on the title and it needs capitals and underlining or italics.2) “For a great low rate you can get online go to the general and save some time”-The General
B)
1) Money: “Wealth is the smallest thing on earth, the least gift that God has bestowed on mankind”-Abraham Lincoln2) Work: “People work better when they know what the goal is and why. It is important that people look forward to coming to work in the morning and enjoy working.”-Elon musk
3) Children: “our greatest natural resource or the mind of children’s.”-Walt Disney grammar
You must start each quote with a capital letter.
4) Marriage: “Keep your eyes wide open before marriage, and half-shut afterwards”-Benjamin Franklin
5) Religion: “Religion is one tree with many branches. As branches, you may say, religions are many, but as a tree, religion is only one.” -Mahatma Gandhi
C)
1) “Do I not destroy my enemies when I make them my friends?” -Abraham Lincoln2) “I think the average person thinks I’m a nut and I deserve whatever happens to me.”–Mike Tyson
3) “Time you enjoy wasting, was not wasted.” –John Lennon
4) “Dogs never bite me. Just humans.” –Marilyn Monroe
5) “Where there is love there is life..”–Mahatma Gandhi
Pretty good quotes. Remember you need dashes before the sources, not just hyphens.
A)
May the force be with you” -Star Wars I’d add the speaker’s name and then italicize or underline the movie title.
“An eye for an aye” -The Bible With the Bible, you need to add the chapter and verseAye???
“Don’t wait, call eight” -Cellino & Barnes commercial
B) These first two are missing their sources, Having the sources adds weight and credibility.
Money “Don’t spend what you don’t have”
Work “Don’t be busy, be productive”
Children “Children must be taught how to think, not what to think.” -Margaret Mead, cultural anthropologist
Marriage “A successful marriage requires falling in love many times, always with the same person.” – Mignon McLaughlinWho’s that? Please identify him or her.
Religion “When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. That’s my religion.” -Abraham LincolnC)
“Be sure you put your feet in the right place, then stand firm.” -Abraham Lincoln
“I’m a nut case, but that is what I believe.” -Mike Tyson
“Time you enjoy wasting, was not wasted.” -John Lennon
“A smart girl leaves before she is left.” -Marilyn Monroe
“An ounce of practice is worth more than tons of preaching.” -Mahatma GandhiOverall, pretty good quotes. You need dashes before the sources,not just hyphens.
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