https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q9shPiDlpjRo3aq0xB1z_Nr-ytQwZacgBOvf-xHQtEU/edit?usp=sharing
Composition 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q9shPiDlpjRo3aq0xB1z_Nr-ytQwZacgBOvf-xHQtEU/edit?usp=sharing
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Hello chelsea,
I really enjoyed your essay your introduction was on point by telling the story i your perspective is very impressive. During the essay you were able to add your point of view and build the perspective from different sides. Overall well done. Your citation is on point. make sure to add the name of the author of the essay you used. Good job
Great job with this Essay Chelsea! Just read over it, there’s a couple of minor spelling and grammatical errors, but that’s about it! Citations look good!
Hi Chelsea,
Great job with your revisions. As stated before there are a few minor grammar errors but overall I enjoyed reading!
Hi Chelsea,
I really enjoyed reading your final version of essay 2 it shows a great understanding you have but I also want to note that there here and there some grammatical typos you could fix before submitting the portfolio, I hope this help and great job with the citation page.