2 thoughts on “Essay 2 – Final Revsion”

  1. jamal, hi
    This is a fabulous essay. Your 6 pager is atop all the essays that I’ve reviewed. congrats on that. Your essay seems to be perfectly fine you have your citations intact you, you listed the author and title whenever you quoted from the excerpt. I must say you had no grammatical error i noticed, keep it up good job.

  2. Hi Jamal,
    Great job on your final revision. I did not find anything that needed revisions. Overall great work!

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