Going back to the assignment and the feedback you gave me, I started noticing a few errors in my writing that I haven’t noticed before reading it and even though I read my work I should’ve had someone else read my work to see any errors because when I was proof reading my paper I didn’t notice any mistakes in the paper. I should’ve realized my mistake in the beginning of my paper stating the article even though a article doesn’t talk and I also noticed a lot more errors along the way the moment the notes that were given to me suggested.