The feedback of the first assignment are very much i was usually get. There are many issues in my work, i know that after when i got graded. i had choose many phases that can actually tell the story, but something i can’t very organize it. That may be the key point i had. Also when i think of summary, I did not think about i have to quote the sentence inside the article, just summarize it using my own word.Transition word may be the worse part i have, i can’t use properly in my word, i may just going to read it loud to fix it.