I noticed my writing has improved since I started college. I can now write an good essay with five complete paragraphs. In college writing i learned how to write a thesis sentence and paraphrase. Also, I learned how to use transitions words. However, there are still areas I need to work on like, concluding sentences. While I am learning to write good concluding sentences I enjoy thinking strategically, it cause me to think outside the box.
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Valencia,
Thank you for starting off these posts and for making the astute observation that college writing is about writing “strategically.” There is thought and direction throughout the essay, and this is why revision and “re-envisioning” becomes more and more important. You have worked diligently all semester and your work shows this. Keep writing!