I get a sense that you understood the readings. But you seem to be having trouble making the two articles “speak” to one another, which is difficult considering they are about two different cities. For instance, I’m not sure what this means: “The thought process between us and others cities, states,
countries differ tremendously we just need to come to a consensus.This conses should
be of the people who were born lucky and into a wealthy family who are well off
whereas other people who live in poverty and have to deal with certain prejudice
because of it.”
I suggest that after you compose something, go back and read it outloud and see if it still makes sense the way it is written. You may need to make changes to the first draft so that your ideas are expressed clearly. Also, read the blog prompts a little more carefully. It asked you to create a vision of a future public space of your own.
I get a sense that you understood the readings. But you seem to be having trouble making the two articles “speak” to one another, which is difficult considering they are about two different cities. For instance, I’m not sure what this means: “The thought process between us and others cities, states,
countries differ tremendously we just need to come to a consensus.This conses should
be of the people who were born lucky and into a wealthy family who are well off
whereas other people who live in poverty and have to deal with certain prejudice
because of it.”
I suggest that after you compose something, go back and read it outloud and see if it still makes sense the way it is written. You may need to make changes to the first draft so that your ideas are expressed clearly. Also, read the blog prompts a little more carefully. It asked you to create a vision of a future public space of your own.