Okay, I was able to open and read the attachment. Good work! I like how you incorporated a good deal of text from the exhibits themselves — although it wasn’t always clear who you were quoting (make sure you provide citations directly after a quoted text). Your description of Dinner Party was interesting also. I think the last question was one of the more difficult ones. I’m not sure what you meant by the arrangement was “fair”. In addition to discussing how the individual objects of art created conversation, I was hoping you would discuss how the show was curated (how the works of art were arranged together and apart from one another).
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Okay, I was able to open and read the attachment. Good work! I like how you incorporated a good deal of text from the exhibits themselves — although it wasn’t always clear who you were quoting (make sure you provide citations directly after a quoted text). Your description of Dinner Party was interesting also. I think the last question was one of the more difficult ones. I’m not sure what you meant by the arrangement was “fair”. In addition to discussing how the individual objects of art created conversation, I was hoping you would discuss how the show was curated (how the works of art were arranged together and apart from one another).