LIB/ARCH 2205 ID Learning Places
Professors Almeida and Swift- Fall 2018
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
Lots of good detail. I think you can be a little more imaginative in the analytical sections. Think more expansively about the potential of space. Also, double check spacing, spelling, and word use before submitting. There were a number of grammatical and formatting errors that make it hard to read. Look at my specific notes embedded in the document in the FILES section of OpenLab.