ENG1101 Comp 1101 (D377)2 Sg2014

Hi Class…remember that you must turn in Essay 3 on Thursday.

Proofing Advice:

For Thursday: in a folder please make sure to put the following:

Good luck and I’ll see you Thursday.

Best,

Prof. Scanlan

This student essay was written for my ENG 1101 class in 2012. Note that this sample essay is good, quite good, but it is not perfect. I think that it may be instructive to study this essay in order to understand what a sincere and significant effort can produce. Please note my margin notes; I’ve put them  on the essay to help you see where this writer faltered–where you can make improvements that this writer missed.

Student-Sample-Essay3-2012

Best,

Prof. Scanlan

Hi Class,

Here is a student sample of a “B+” Annotated Bibliography.

Student-Sample-Annotated-Bibliography-2014

Note: The interview (primary source) does not need to be completed by Tuesday.

-Prof. Scanlan

Hi Class,

Sorry! I thought on Tuesday, April 29  you were to turn in the topic summary and 5 questions–but that is due on Thursday, May 1. I apologize for that mistake.

We will have another library day on Tuesday. Please meet in class.

To repeat: The topic summary and 5 key questions are due Thursday  (I will call this assignment Journal 6 for accounting purposes).

Best,

Prof. Scanlan

Hi Class,

I hope that your Spring Break is going marvelously! For our return on Thursday, April 24th, please have Journal 5 ready: Read Deak and Egan in our textbook and then write 250 words on which of the two writer’s is harder to understand and why. Typed, double-spaced. Also, please bring your books to class.

Do you have an idea of Essay 3? Email me your ideas. I have already approved several ideas.

Best,

Prof. Scanlan

04/05/2014

I took this photo of Bronx County Hall of Justice on East 161 Street on my way home from school. The sun reflection on the windows of this court building had hit me while I was walking. The symmetrical windows frames creates many noticeable and plain to see rectangles and trapezoids, while the refection makes a unbalance. Mood of this photo is peaceful cause of the reflection of clouds and the sun reflecting off the windows.

3/25/2014, The Run to Class

This photo was taken in front of the City tech campus on the corner of
Johnson Street and Jay Street. On my way to the school, I’ve noticed how most of the environment looked straight and orderly even the people had a order look to them to my position in the street. One side had people leaving and the other had students walking to the building. Sadly, when I took the photo I moved the camera in a hurry to get to class on time. But it ended up really good, the framing of the camera contradicts the cracks in the cement   I could imagine the person holding the camera following or running  like in a chase scene in a movie.

I took this photo on April 05 between Henry st and Chenango st, Binghamton new York,  while traveling to Akron, Ohio. From where I was standing, inside the greyhound station. I could notice the height of the Habitat For Humanity tower right in front of it, there is  the floating united states flag. near the tower I could also see few buildings about a block away. It looks really quiet , I stood there for about 10 minute but I saw nobody walking around, beside cars moving around, there was really  no activity.

While walking home from school, I was thinking of a what type of photo to take for a project I had coming up. I decided to take a photo of the street I was walking down. The sidewalk was filled with snow and the tree’s had no leaves. The sky was cloudy and looked like it would drop more snow any second. The street was filled with parked cars and the road was clear of snow.