Blog Post Revision Plans 10/5/2023

After what we discussed in class, I would like to add smoother transitions and also clarify my points. After discussing how well you can incorporate McLuhan versus when you do it. I also want to work on broadening my responses to the questions being asked in the prompt and using them as a guideline rather than just answering the questions being presented in the bullet points. I want to include more of what we discuss in class in my paper as well as to stick to what is being asked of me.