Revision Plan

For my Tech-Lit Narrative paper, I plan to elaborate and give more examples of how the dynamics changed among my family. I stated that it changed, but I didn’t say how. I would like to incorporate some of the readings we discussed in class, and I’m also going to take into consideration the comments that was given on my paper. I plan on revising the paragraph about my childhood, and I want to talk more about social media. I am going to proof reading and make sure there are no grammatical errors and all my thoughts flow and makes sense.