My revision plans

I have many aspects of my narrative that I need to revise before giving in my final product on Wednesday. My plans for revision start with thoroughly re-reading my draft and noting the things that I have to improve in specificity and the things that I have to remove from the essay in order to communicate my ideas and main points clearly to the reader. I also plan to do a little more freewriting in order to let my ideas flow and allow my ideas to lead me into broader and more in-depth concepts. Taking the comments made on my draft into consideration, I plan to incorporate a sense of orality along with one or two readings that relate to my personal experiences and my relationship with literature and technology, which will aid my ideas and concepts into a better understanding.