For this essay a revision is not required; however, you have the option of revising.  You must follow the attached instructions for revision.  A significant show of effort can result in a higher grade.  If you do not show significant effort, your grade will remain the same.  Your grade will not go down with a revision.  Please take the opportunity to improve!  Follow the instructions on the sheet attached below:

eng 1101 Instructions for Revision Essay 1