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Maria Alcantara

Translation Essay

ENG 2400 Professor Scanlan

March 30, 2022

 

 

New Boy portrayed on film

 

Introduction:  New Boy written by Roddy Doyle, is a short story that envelops the reader into a third person character and leads them to experience how it feels to be an outsider “The New Boy”, the reader experiences this feeling through the Protagonist ‘s mind, in this case Joseph.  This short story not only focuses on the idea of bullying and the idea of being an outsider, but also on the idea of forgiveness. As the story goes on Joseph overcomes bullying, and to a certain extent forgives his classmates, showing his pure heart.

Paragraph 1: Summary of story, and Linda Cahir’s Type of  Translation.

Based on a short story by Roddy Doyle, and film by Steph Green, the “New Boy” captures the experience of being the new boy through the eyes of a young boy named Joseph. A Nine-year-old African boy who had a rough start, after leaving his country for a better life in Ireland. But under those circumstances and as the new boy in his class, Joseph becomes an easy target, after all, he is an outsider, which makes him an easy target for the class bullies. Joseph’s mind travels back to his nonchalant past and his happy old school days. As the story goes on, we get to see Joseph’s behavior change towards his classmates Christian Kelly and Hazel O’Hara. As a result, the story and film share the same tale, This is considered a traditional translation. Which maintains the overall traits of the written work. However,  some details might be changed.

Paragraph 2: (Five part reading tool) – Setting and Character (beginning scene.)

The film portrays Joseph’s prior school years in Africa and his new school in Ireland, showing the differences between schooling in different parts of the world from his point of view. I’ll discuss the difference between the setting and the characters in the story and film. I will talk about the flashbacks he gets at the beginning of the story where he thinks about his school back home and connects it to his new school in Ireland. Furthermore, I’ll detail the difference between his professors, classroom environment and more. Through this Joseph lets the reader experience what it feels like to be an outsider through his eyes.

Paragraph 3: (Two film concepts) –  Non diegetic and mise en scene (milk scene.)

Then I will go into depth and explain how the non-diegetic sound is being used in the milk scene. When Joseph goes to the backyard different sounds go on, especially when the milk gets thrown at him and hits the wall. This makes the film more intense and dramatic. After this, I’ll proceed to talk about the mise en scene of the film and explain the similarities and differences that the story and film have.

Paragraph 4: (Exchange concept) – do you think there is justice or forgiveness in this story? Should Joseph forgive the boys at the end of the story? (Ending scene)

Lastly, I will discuss the last scene where Joseph and the boys get in trouble. Here I will discuss if there is any type of justice or forgiveness from Joseph’s side toward the boys, after what they did to him. I’ll discuss the ending scene giving my thoughts on if I believe Joseph should forgive the boys or not.

Conclusion: New Boy is a story that lets the reader experience what it feels like to be an outsider through his eyes. As readers we experience, and feel all the emotions, and thoughts that go through Joseph’s head. Making it easier for us to understand why he acts and does the things he does.

Prophet – Maria Alcantara

A prophet is a proclaimer of the will of God. In religion, a prophet is someone who has communication with the divine and delivers teachings, messages, and signs to the ones in need. I believe that being a prophet is something very special and a gift that is given to a selected group of people. I also believe that being a prophet is not an easy job. This is a job that is only meant for the ones with pure souls and kind hearts. In addition, Marjane is the Prophet of the story. Marjane said that she always liked religion. She wanted to become a prophet because she wanted to be good for her family and the Iranian people. Although her family was not religious, she said, “I was born with religion,” By the time she was six, Marjane knew what she wanted to be when she grew up; “At the age of six I was already sure I was the last prophet.” This was a few years before the revolution. Furthermore, her desire to become a prophet can be seen by the relationship she had with God. She was seen as a rebel because she was against the revolution, however her desire to show that Iran was not what it seemed was always there.

 

 

 

Coffeehouse #2 – Maria Alcantara

I found the story of “The Complete Persepolis” unique and interesting. I didn’t expect the whole story to be a comic book, however I really liked that twist. I’ve never been really into comics, but I really liked this one. After analyzing several stories, I concluded that with comics it becomes easier and more fun to read and stay entertained. I’m a visual learner so I enjoyed all the pictures. It made me have a better idea of how things were happening and where they were taking place. Furthermore, my favorite story was “The F.14s.” This was my favorite story because somehow, I made a connection with the war that was happening in the story, and the one that is happening right now between Ukraine and Russia. At the beginning of the story their fear was being portrayed and that reminded me of the fear we all have with the current situation that is happening right now. Another thing that really caught my attention was the end of the story. When the little girl says, “I wish that he were alive and in jail rather than dead and a hero.” This line really touched my heart because it made me think about all the lives that have been lost at war and all the lives that have been taken in this current conflict . In conclusion, this story made me see things from a different perspective and have more respect for those who have lost family members at war and those who have current families in it. 

 

 

Maria Alcantara

 

There are a lot of things that caught my attention about this tale. “To Build a Fire” is a story that can portrait and illustrate many different emotions and feelings. At the beginning of the story, I was a little bit confused, and my emotions were all over the place. But as I kept reading, I started feeling tense, and cold. As the story went on. I started seeing the mixed emotions that were being portrayed by the main character. When he started walking deeper into the trail, I started feeling the fear that he was going through. I always kept in mind when Sulphur Creek said, “no man should travel alone if it’s colder than 50 degrees below zero.” Throughout the whole story I always wondered why he didn’t listen to the old man’s wisdom. Was it because he didn’t believe the man? Or because he thought he could handle the cold? I also asked myself why he didn’t have a companion? And why did he choose that specific day to get to the boys? In addition, as the story went on all those questions and mixed emotions crossed my mind. I’m assuming that is because as a reader you put yourself in the shoes of the main character. You analyze the story and its characters’ behaviors. I think these effects are created because of how connected we get to the story and because of how detailed the story is.