Shylin,
You do a fine idea for this comparison. I approve of the ideas, but the central issue is that you need much more writing. With the use of several direct quotes, I believe you will be able to develop this essay. Keep going.
Best,
Prof. Scanlan
Shylin,
You do a fine idea for this comparison. I approve of the ideas, but the central issue is that you need much more writing. With the use of several direct quotes, I believe you will be able to develop this essay. Keep going.
Best,
Prof. Scanlan