Remember: 900 words for the final draft.

 

Hi Class,

Here’s our agenda:

1–Freewrite

2–Weaving/introducing quotations

3–Why mention the two articles? State why you selected each one.

4–Is IH mentioned in your thesis? Why not?

5–Proofreading (capitalizing, commas, spelling)

6–Peer Review (if you don’t have a printed copy, please print one now)

**Remember: no naked quotes:

Naked quotes are bad!!!!!

“As an adult, I feel like their acquaintance instead of their daughter.”

 

I wish I was closer to my parents, and so Jenny Liao’s idea that “As an adult, I feel like their [my parents] acquaintance instead of their daughter,” helps me to think about the importance of language (1).

 

HOMEWORK FOR TUESDAY, OCTOBER 11: FINAL DRAFT OF ESSAY 1 DUE IN CLASS. BRING FINAL COPY, PEER REVIEW, AND FIRST DRAFT.