ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 TuTh
A City Tech OpenLab Course Site
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
Great website! You have a keen sense of color and design! Bravo! Your process essay was also very nice–you shared your experience simply but answered all of my questions.
For the website, I’d suggest you either rearrange text on each page or even spread it out more, in order to make the text easier to read and understand. For the process essay, I’d also suggest not making it one giant paragraph. Each main idea needs to have its own paragraph.
100 points (out of 100)!