ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 TuTh
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Your process essay was great and really answered the questions fully. I couldn’t actually see your website, however. It was just text, no graphics or anything.
That’s my big suggestion for revision for the portfolio. Make sure I can actually see this cool website, not just the words.
For the essay, I’d divide each main idea into individual paragraphs. Right now it’s just a chunk of text that made it easy for me to lose my place in your story.
100 points (out of 100)!