Your website looked really good (despite your thoughts that you weren’t good at this), at least the first few pages, but I noticed that some of your chapters had no content (I loved the chapter idea). I suggest you go back and see what happened there for the final portfolio.
I enjoyed your essay a lot–you were honest with me and yourself, and that’s why I wanted you to write about the process. I wouldn’t change or add anything.
Fix the missing website stuff (and add the page about the audience), and you’re good to go!
Your website looked really good (despite your thoughts that you weren’t good at this), at least the first few pages, but I noticed that some of your chapters had no content (I loved the chapter idea). I suggest you go back and see what happened there for the final portfolio.
I enjoyed your essay a lot–you were honest with me and yourself, and that’s why I wanted you to write about the process. I wouldn’t change or add anything.
Fix the missing website stuff (and add the page about the audience), and you’re good to go!
100 points (out of 100)!