English 1101 Fall 2019 Section 342
Composition 1
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I really like your essay you just need to fix some grammar and go more in details.
Great essay just need to fix some grammar and a little more detail.
I like the story you were trying to tell with your essay I just wish you’d add a bit more details to portray it a little better.
I really love essay but you need to.fix some grammar mistakes, add transitional phrases to not have run-on sentences!!
I really enjoyed your essay and thought it had good structure. However there were a few grammar errors that could be fixed but other that that everything was good.