Client: Midtown Comics

Target Audience: Comic Book lovers with busy lives.

Features/Benefits:

Bike Messengers/ Deliver’s your comic’s on the day they are released

Online Service/ Order your comics online

Other comic related items available/ Increase your collection, more clothing

Tone:

I want the commercial to have a comedic tone, I want it to start slow and dull but have moments of excitement in between.

Where the Ad Will Play: ABC, and CW 11

Reason: Because these 2 networks have superhero related shows, and of those people who watch those shows there has to be comic book lovers.

Script:

1. First scene opens up with a man working at the office, He’s extremely bored looking at his watch.
2. We see his collection of comics in his desk.
3. We see a man swinging through the city like spider-man
4. Back to the worker, we see him on his computer typing, then looking online for new comics
5. He leaves the room
6. We see our delivery guy arrive at the building when our protagonist works
7. Back to our protagonist, he realizes he forgot something and goes back to his office
8. When he gets there he see’s a stack of new comics
9. We get our logo and tagline.

1: Establishing shot a house, its nighttime

2: inside the house we see a couple watching TV

3: they kiss

4: They hear a loud noise

5: And intruder, ex boyfriend, has broken the glass door

6: The intruder enters the holding a gun, the man looks around

7: The intruder grabs the man from behind in a choke hold

8: Covers his mouth

9: Enter the room where the woman’s sitting on the couch

10: Shoots the gun to get her attention

11: Aims the gun at her head

12: But takes his own life, leaving her with a fate worst then death the loss of her true love

Panel 1: Establishing shot of a house, it is raining hard

Panel 2: introducing our characters, bobby and sue, pan from left to right

Panel 3: Close up, the couple kiss

Panel 4: Someone outside turns the doorknob, close up

Panel 5: Bobby and Sue hear something, close up shot

Panel 6: Bobby goes into the hall, he calls out “Hello!?” zolly shot

Panel 7: Bobby turns around then gets grabbed from behind, close up of bobbys eyes

Panel 8: Close up of eyes

Panel 9: Over the shoulder shot, the predator has bobby in his arm

Panel 10: Over the shoulder reaction shot

Panel 11: over the shoulder shot Sue yells out to “Stop!”

Panel 12: Over the shoulder shot, Bobby is shot

Panel 13: Pan down shot of sues reaction

Panel 14: Profile shot, gun is pointed to sues head

Panel 15: Close up

Panel 16: Medium shot Intruder shots himself

1: Establishing shot a house, its nighttime

2: inside the house we see a couple talking in the kitchen

3: they kiss

4: Another man sneaks into the house shot

5: this shot takes place from the intruder’s point of view in the halls you can hear the couple speaking

6: The man in the kitchen moves into the dining room

7: The intruder grabs the man from behind covering his mouth

8: the man is stabbed all you see are his eyes in pain

9: the intruder goes towards the kitchen, and passes a framed photo of the intruder hugging the woman and the man next to them

10: The intruder enters the kitchen holding a gun shadows all you see

11: he whispers I still love you pulls the trigger

12: pulls the gun on himself and takes his own life

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