After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1 I plan to add more to my reelections and make them deeper with details and personal experience. I plan to fix any grammatical errors as well as fixing my sentences in the way I phrase it so it can make more sense. I plan to add the citations I missed and label the categories right and make sure everything is clear and organized. Overall I plan to make my ed narrative more clear, personal, accurate and informative.
