After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to work on adding more details in my writing. I will try to create more theater of the mind. Also I will work on using less vague wording that makes it hard for the reader to feel and understand my story better. I will also make the scenes in my writing more dramatic and vivid. Overall I am going to work better on ending off my ed narrative with speaking about what I have learned and how this situation has shaped me. I will be meeting with a tutor to better my wording in my sentences and for assistance on how to create more theatre of the mind.
