Opening sentence: Volleyball has taught me many things that I never knew it was possible.
Scene 1: Walking into school with no friends and nothing to look forward to.
Scene 2: Walking into the first playoff match (tournament), describe the scene and how I felt nervous. Make sure to add the intimidation of the enemy team.
Scene 3: After losing in the playoffs, the team eats in a restaurant to celebrate their hard work. Helping me realize that I went from having no friends and nothing to look forward to, to having a group of friends and something to look forward to.
looks good!