Analysis of Student Example ~ Kamaro D.

I’m writing about Fan Zhou’s educational narrative essay. This writing piece starts with a mentor quote and then uses the quote to show his two-world experience. Zhou explains his transition from the Chinese language to learning to speak and write English properly. The writer does a good job of showing the difference between both languages. By provides many scenes of how others treated him when he struggled with learning proper English. I also like he explains every scene making sure the reader properly interprets the scene represented.

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