Jonathan Valencia

ENG 1121 –D465

04/11/2016

Assignment: Essay 3 outline

Opener: “You, who are so-called illegal aliens, must know that no human being is illegal. That is a contradiction in terms. Human beings can be beautiful or more beautiful, they can be fat or skinny, they can be right or wrong, but illegal? How can a human being be illegal?”

Thesis: There are a lot of immigrants from various countries men, women, and children trying to make a better life for themselves but are always worrying about being deported and causes the separation of families, over populated camps, and a bigger issue is deporting children.

Body Paragraph 1: Separation of Families

• The loss of a family member
• Single Parents
• No father or mother figure to look out for the lids
• No care for children

Body Paragraph 2: Immigration camps

• Overcrowded
• May be years till you are sent back to homeland or another country
• Mistreatment and no privileges
• Not given attention

Body Paragraph 3: Deportation of Children

• No place to return
• No one to take care of them
• Gang recruitment
• Orphans
• Looking for parents who are in the country

Conclusion

• Restate thesis sentence