Jonathan Valencia
May 4, 2016
ENG 1121- D465
Assignment: 7 points of peer review
Partner: Joyce Tam
- Opener – Albert Einstein once stated, “Scientist investigate that which already is; Engineers create that which has never been.”
- Thesis w/3 subtopic – It was developed in response to problems associated with replacement of tissues lost due to trauma, disease, physical defects and/ or degenerative conditions.
- 3-subtopic paragraph –¶1 replacement of tissues lost due to trauma, ¶2 disease, and ¶3 physical defects and/ or degenerative conditions.
- Topic sentences
- Tissue engineering is needed to eliminate the problem with demand and supply for organ transplantation.
- The challenges to cell culture for tissue engineering applications are currently under research by examining different cells of the human bodies.
- Despite advancing technology there are still major challenges to Tissue Engineering applications for regenerative medicine.
- Tissue Engineering is offered as a solution because of its’ key components vital to regeneration of tissues and organs.
- Transitions – Transitions seen used in the first sentences of a body paragraph or through out the subtopic paragraphs.
- Grammar Conventions – No grammar mistakes missing
- Conclusion w/ thesis restated and lead-out – Restates thesis sentence and brief summary about her research topic.
