Revised Suspense

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Man is waiting at an empty street waiting for the bus. All the businesses have closed for the night and no one is out. There is also a park nearby and it is also empty.  The man is uncomfortable and seems uneasy. The man hears something. He hears it coming from the bushes in the park. The man stares off and sees nothing. A figure starts to creep on him from a low angle. The man is unaware still looking at the bushes. The man looks at his watch too see the time and continues to look around the street. He looks to his left and sees a figure. He freezes and then keeps looking but the figure is gone. The figure creeps up behind him and jumps past him. The man does not get to see what it was as the figure runs into the park and is not seen again.