Different Stance on peer editor’s essay and Five parts of Rhetorical Situation of my peer’s essay

Different stance on your peer editor’s essay

Learning through our mistake is one of lesson to be appreciated than to remain as a scar for the rest of your life. We as seeds continued to develop into becoming extraordinary through countless of failures. These failures advocates the maturity and growth when we overcome it over time or even decades. It takes us to those moments where we struggle back in the past to growth someone who could handle the pain. Without it, humanity will not continue to strife for another day to be frank.

Five Parts of Rhetorical Situations: Alex Diaz

Purpose of his essay: The purpose of Alex Diaz’s essay to indicated how outside factors such as addiction and violence affected his GPA and high school.

Genre: Frankly, his essay consist a collection of tragedies.

Stance: When we are tainted by drowning in our failures, we learned the consequences behind them.

Media/design style: The structure started from the time his violence and addictions get out of hand to learning from his failure in which I saw the pattern is repetition in his writing.

Audience: Alex’s essay caters to adolescents who experience the similar circumstances as him and help them to overcome the problem.

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