Films from Literature ENG 2400 Spring 2024 0565

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  • Feb. 2 (a) Looking for literary devices in Lolita
  • #89706

    Prof. Masiello
    Participant

    Please post your answers here. You do not need the attachments I emailed you this morning.

    The directions are on top of that page.   You are supposed to find examples of metaphors, similes, alliteration, and personification.

    A much clearer copy with numbered lines from p. 50 of the pdf version of Lolita is in Files. When you are done, please watch the film clips from the two movie versions from 1962 and 1997.  There are two videos for today.

    The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening. I had a drink. […] Most of

    the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. […]An old fence at the back of the garden separated us

    from the neighbor’s garbage receptacles and lilacs; but there was nothing between the front end of our lawn

    (where it sloped along one side of the house) and the street. Therefore I was able to watch (with the smirk of

    one about to perform a good action) for the return of Charlotte […]. As I lurched and lunged with the hand

    mower, bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun, I kept an eye on that section of suburban street. It

    curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees, then sped towards us down, down, quite sharply, past

    old Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours) and disappeared

    behind our own front porch which I could not see from where I happily belched and labored. The dandelions

    perished. A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple. Two little girls, Marion and Mabel, whose comings and

    goings I had mechanically followed of late (but who could replace my Lolita?) went toward the avenue (from

    which our Lawn Street cascaded), one pushing a bicycle, the other feeding from a paper bag, both talking at

    the top of their sunny voices. Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic

    Negro, grinned at me from afar and shouted, re-shouted, commented by gesture, that I was mighty energetic

    today. The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car–not Charlotte’s. The prettier

    of the two little girls (Mabel, I think), shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair–a nymphet, by Pan!–ran

    back down the street crumpling her paper bag and was hidden from this Green Goat by the frontage of Mr.

    and Mrs. Humbert’s residence. A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue, dragging some

    of it on its roof before the shadows snapped, and swung by at an idiotic pace, the sweat shirted driver roof-

    holding with his left hand and the junkman’s dog tearing alongside. There was a smiling pause–and then,

    with a flutter in my breast, I witnessed the return of the Blue Sedan. I saw it glide downhill and disappear

    behind the corner of the house. I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile. It occurred to me that until she went

    upstairs she would not know whether I had gone or not.

    Please try to find at least ten literary devices in 20 minutes. The entire novel is of the same literary style, so this is a way for you to become aware of how Nabokov writes.

    Do it like this: line 1 the sun made its rounds = personification

    #92265

    Tshari Yancey
    Participant

    Line 5 : the dandelions had changed from suns to moons = personification

    Line 11: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun = personification

    Line 26: Green Goat = alliteration

    Line 32: I saw it glide downhill and disappear = personification

    Line 33: calm pale profile = alliteration

    Line 11: that section of suburban street = alliteration

    Line 11: As I lurched and lunged with the hand = smilie / alliteration

    Line 29: sweat shirted = alliteration

    Line 6: The gin and Lolita were dancing in me = personification

    Line 27: A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue = metaphor

    Line 5: It was crowded with dandelion = metaphor

    #92272

    Marie Bouquet
    Participant

    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>1. Metaphor: “Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons.” This compares the appearance of dandelions to suns and moons.</span></p>
    <b id=”docs-internal-guid-17079a6b-7fff-7c1e-47c1-b496eb2c5ce5″ style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>2. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” </span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>3. Simile: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” This compares the movement of grass to the action of twittering.</span><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”></b></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>4. Alliteration: “I lurched and lunged with the hand mower.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>5. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” The grass is given the ability to visually twirl or move in the sunlight.</span></p>
    <b id=”docs-internal-guid-e90127ff-7fff-7684-532c-0346502fb6af” style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>6. Metaphor: “Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours).” This compares Miss Opposite’s house and lawn to a brick structure covered in ivy.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>7. Alliteration: “Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic Negro.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>8. Simile: “A nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s appearance to that of a nymphet, using the word “like” or “as” is implied.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>9. Personification: “The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car.” The dog is described as a fool, giving it human-like qualities.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>10. Metaphor: “The prettier of the two little girls, shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair—a nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s beauty to that of a nymphet.</span></p>
     

     

    #92274

    Marie Bouquet
    Participant

    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>1. Metaphor: “Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons.” This compares the appearance of dandelions to suns and moons.</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”><b id=”docs-internal-guid-684bee94-7fff-85a0-8f1b-9455a4cb3fd0″ style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>2. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” </span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>3. Simile: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” This compares the movement of grass to the action of twittering.</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>4. Alliteration: “I lurched and lunged with the hand mower.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr”></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>5. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” The grass is given the ability to visually twirl or move in the sunlight.</span></p>
    <b id=”docs-internal-guid-e90127ff-7fff-7684-532c-0346502fb6af” style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>6. Metaphor: “Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours).” This compares Miss Opposite’s house and lawn to a brick structure covered in ivy.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>7. Alliteration: “Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic Negro.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>8. Simile: “A nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s appearance to that of a nymphet, using the word “like” or “as” is implied.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>9. Personification: “The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car.” The dog is described as a fool, giving it human-like qualities.</span></p>
    <b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>10. Metaphor: “The prettier of the two little girls, shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair—a nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s beauty to that of a nymphet.</span></p>
     

    #92275

    Mu Song
    Participant

    Line 1: The sun made its usual run of the house = Personification
    Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. = Metaphor
    Line 7: I lurched and lunged = Alliteration
    Line 8: bits of grass optically twittering = Personification
    Line 14: Marion and Mabel = Alliteration
    Line 24: Green Goat = Alliteration
    Line 26: before the shadows snapped, and swung = Alliteration
    Line 27: the sweat shirted driver = Alliteration
    Line 29: I saw it glide downhill and disappear = Personification
    Line 30: calm pale profile = Alliteration

    #92290

    Alyssa skerret
    Participant

    Line 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripped into evening. = Simile

    Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. = Metaphor

    Line 6: <span style=”color: #000000; font-family: Tinos; font-size: medium;”>As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower. = Simile/Alliteration</span>

    Line 7: Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun. = Personification

    Line 8: I kept an eye on that section of the suburban street. = Alliteration

    Line 22: <span style=”color: #000000; font-family: Tinos; font-size: medium;”>halter with little to halt,… = Alliteration</span>

    Line 24: Green Goat = Alliteration

    Line 28: With a flutter in my breast,.. = Metaphor

    Line 29: I saw it glide downhill and disappear behind the corner of the house. = Personification

    Line 31:  I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile. = Alliteration

     

    #92296

    Andrew_R
    Participant

    Line 2 – The dandelions had changed from suns to moons – metaphor

    Line 5 – As I lurched and lunged – alliteration

    Line 8 – bits of grass optically twittering – personification

    Line 9 – A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – personification

    Line 10 – but who could replace my lolita? – symbolism/motif

    Line 14 – The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer – metaphor

    Line 24 – Green Goat – alliteration

    Line 28 – flutter in my breast – metaphor

    Line 29 – sweat shirted driver – alliteration

    Line 30 – pale profile – alliteration

    #92303

    Mehriniso
    Participant

    1. Line 1- The sun made its usual round of the house- Personification
    2. Line 1 – As the afternoon ripened into evening- Simile
    3 Line 2 – Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons – Metaphor
    4. Line 7 – As I lurched and lunged – Simile & Alliteration
    5. Line 8 – Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun – Personification
    6. Line 9 – It curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees, then sped towards us down, down, quite sharply – Metaphor
    7. Line 12 – Disappeared behind our own front porch – Personification
    8. Line 22 – Halter with little to halt – Alliteration
    9. Line 24 – Green Goat – Alliteration
    10. Line 25 – A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue – Personification
    11. Line 28 – With a flutter in my breast – Metaphor
    12. Line 30 – Pale Profile – Alliteration

    #92483

    Angel Padilla
    Participant

    Line 1: The Sun made its usual round of the house (Personification)

    Line 1: as the afternoon ripened into evening(Simile)

    Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons(Metaphor)

    Line 7-8: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun(Personification)

    Line 8-9: section of suburban street(Alliteration)

    Line 9: It curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees(Personification)

    Line 26: shadows snapped(alliteration)

    Line 27: sweat shirted(alliteration)

    Line 28-29: with a flutter in my breast(Metaphor)

    Line 29-30: I witnessed the return of the Blue Sedan. I saw it glide downhill and disappear behind the corner of the house.(Personification)

     

    #92490

    Rafi
    Participant

    Line 2. Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moon = Metaphor

    line 1. The Sun made its usual round of the house = Personification

    Line 7. I lurched and lunged = Alliteration

    Line 8. bits of grass optically twittering = personification

    Line 14. Marion and Mabel = Alliteration

    Line 12. Disappeared behind our own front porch = Personification

    Line 24. Green Goat = alliteration

    Line 28. flutter in my breast = metaphor

    Line 29. I saw it glide downhill and disappear = Personification

    Line 30. pale profile = alliteration

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    #92548

    Angel Ordonez
    Participant

    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 1 The sun made its usual round of the house – Personificantion</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 2 Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. – METAPHOR</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 11 house and high-sloping – Alliteration</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 11 (much trimmer than ours) and disappeared behind – Personification</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 17 feeding from a paper bag, both talking at the top of their sunny voices. – METAHPOR</span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 24 Green Goat – Alliteration </span></p>
    <p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 26 roof before the shadows snapped,  and swung by at an idiotic pace, – Personification</span></p>
     

    #92549

    Bryan Jimenez
    Participant

    Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons = Metaphor
    Line 7: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun = Simile
    Line 7: bits of grass optically twittering = Alliteration
    Line 14: Two little girls, Marion, and Mabel, both talking at the top of their sunny voices = Personification
    Line 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening = Metaphor
    Line 22: a nymphet, by Pan! = Simile
    Line 20: The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car = Alliteration
    Line 25: A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue = Personification
    Line 26: sweat shirted driver roof-holding = Alliteration
    Line 27: the junkman’s dog tearing alongside = Personification

    #92560

    TravisBowry
    Participant

    Line 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening. – personification
    Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons – metaphor
    Line 25: and swung by at an idiotic pace – metaphor
    Line 14: Two little girls, Marion and Mabel – alliteration
    Line 24: Green Goat by the frontage of Mr. and Mrs. Humbert’s residence – alliteration
    Line 7:  As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower – alliteration
    Line 7:  As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower – simile
    Line 30: I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile – metaphor
    Line 13: A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – metaphor
    Line 8:  I kept an eye on that section of suburban street. – personification

    #92603

    Jennifer C
    Participant

    Line 1 : The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening – personification
    Line 4: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun- alliteration
    Line 7: with the smirk of one about to perform a good action- simile
    Line 12: past old miss opposites ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn- alliteration
    Line 14: The dandelions perished- personification
    Line 16: Two little girls, marion and mabel, whose comings and goings- irony
    Line 20: The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car not charlotte’s- alliteration
    Line 23: ran back down the street crumpling her paper bag- imagery
    Line 36: I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile- alliteration
    Line 38: shadows snapped- personification

    #92881

    Naila
    Participant

    Line 1: As the afternoon ripped into the evening- metaphor

    Line 4: It was crowded with dandelions – imagery

    Line 9: There are some eructations that sound like cheers–at least, mine did. – simile

    Line 15: Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun – metaphor

    line 21: A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – personification

    Line 22: whose comings and goings I had mechanically followed of late – metaphor

    Line 25: Both talking at the top of their sunny voices – metaphor

    Line 33:  A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade – metaphor

    Line 34: dragging some of it on its roof before the shadows snapped – metaphor

    Line 39: her calm pale profile. – alliteration

     

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