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- Feb. 2 (a) Looking for literary devices in Lolita
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February 3, 2023 at 11:23 am #89706
Prof. MasielloParticipantPlease post your answers here. You do not need the attachments I emailed you this morning.
The directions are on top of that page. You are supposed to find examples of metaphors, similes, alliteration, and personification.
A much clearer copy with numbered lines from p. 50 of the pdf version of Lolita is in Files. When you are done, please watch the film clips from the two movie versions from 1962 and 1997. There are two videos for today.
The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening. I had a drink. […] Most of
the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. […]An old fence at the back of the garden separated us
from the neighbor’s garbage receptacles and lilacs; but there was nothing between the front end of our lawn
(where it sloped along one side of the house) and the street. Therefore I was able to watch (with the smirk of
one about to perform a good action) for the return of Charlotte […]. As I lurched and lunged with the hand
mower, bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun, I kept an eye on that section of suburban street. It
curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees, then sped towards us down, down, quite sharply, past
old Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours) and disappeared
behind our own front porch which I could not see from where I happily belched and labored. The dandelions
perished. A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple. Two little girls, Marion and Mabel, whose comings and
goings I had mechanically followed of late (but who could replace my Lolita?) went toward the avenue (from
which our Lawn Street cascaded), one pushing a bicycle, the other feeding from a paper bag, both talking at
the top of their sunny voices. Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic
Negro, grinned at me from afar and shouted, re-shouted, commented by gesture, that I was mighty energetic
today. The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car–not Charlotte’s. The prettier
of the two little girls (Mabel, I think), shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair–a nymphet, by Pan!–ran
back down the street crumpling her paper bag and was hidden from this Green Goat by the frontage of Mr.
and Mrs. Humbert’s residence. A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue, dragging some
of it on its roof before the shadows snapped, and swung by at an idiotic pace, the sweat shirted driver roof-
holding with his left hand and the junkman’s dog tearing alongside. There was a smiling pause–and then,
with a flutter in my breast, I witnessed the return of the Blue Sedan. I saw it glide downhill and disappear
behind the corner of the house. I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile. It occurred to me that until she went
upstairs she would not know whether I had gone or not.
Please try to find at least ten literary devices in 20 minutes. The entire novel is of the same literary style, so this is a way for you to become aware of how Nabokov writes.
Do it like this: line 1 the sun made its rounds = personification
- This topic was modified 9 months, 3 weeks ago by Prof. Masiello.
February 2, 2024 at 6:42 pm #92265
Tshari YanceyParticipantLine 5 : the dandelions had changed from suns to moons = personification
Line 11: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun = personification
Line 26: Green Goat = alliteration
Line 32: I saw it glide downhill and disappear = personification
Line 33: calm pale profile = alliteration
Line 11: that section of suburban street = alliteration
Line 11: As I lurched and lunged with the hand = smilie / alliteration
Line 29: sweat shirted = alliteration
Line 6: The gin and Lolita were dancing in me = personification
Line 27: A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue = metaphor
Line 5: It was crowded with dandelion = metaphor
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February 2, 2024 at 11:09 pm #92272
Marie BouquetParticipant<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>1. Metaphor: “Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons.” This compares the appearance of dandelions to suns and moons.</span></p>
<b id=”docs-internal-guid-17079a6b-7fff-7c1e-47c1-b496eb2c5ce5″ style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>2. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” </span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>3. Simile: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” This compares the movement of grass to the action of twittering.</span><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”></b></p>
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<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>4. Alliteration: “I lurched and lunged with the hand mower.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>5. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” The grass is given the ability to visually twirl or move in the sunlight.</span></p>
<b id=”docs-internal-guid-e90127ff-7fff-7684-532c-0346502fb6af” style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>6. Metaphor: “Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours).” This compares Miss Opposite’s house and lawn to a brick structure covered in ivy.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>7. Alliteration: “Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic Negro.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>8. Simile: “A nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s appearance to that of a nymphet, using the word “like” or “as” is implied.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>9. Personification: “The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car.” The dog is described as a fool, giving it human-like qualities.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>10. Metaphor: “The prettier of the two little girls, shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair—a nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s beauty to that of a nymphet.</span></p>
- This reply was modified 9 months, 3 weeks ago by Marie Bouquet.
February 2, 2024 at 11:17 pm #92274
Marie BouquetParticipant<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>1. Metaphor: “Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons.” This compares the appearance of dandelions to suns and moons.</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr”><b id=”docs-internal-guid-684bee94-7fff-85a0-8f1b-9455a4cb3fd0″ style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>2. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” </span></p>
<p dir=”ltr”><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>3. Simile: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” This compares the movement of grass to the action of twittering.</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr”><b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>4. Alliteration: “I lurched and lunged with the hand mower.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
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<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>5. Personification: “Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun.” The grass is given the ability to visually twirl or move in the sunlight.</span></p>
<b id=”docs-internal-guid-e90127ff-7fff-7684-532c-0346502fb6af” style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>6. Metaphor: “Miss Opposite’s ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn (much trimmer than ours).” This compares Miss Opposite’s house and lawn to a brick structure covered in ivy.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>7. Alliteration: “Leslie, old Miss Opposite’s gardener and chauffeur, a very amiable and athletic Negro.” The repetition of the “l” sound creates alliteration.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>8. Simile: “A nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s appearance to that of a nymphet, using the word “like” or “as” is implied.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>9. Personification: “The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car.” The dog is described as a fool, giving it human-like qualities.</span></p>
<b style=”font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; caret-color: #000000; color: #000000; font-weight: normal;”> </b>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>10. Metaphor: “The prettier of the two little girls, shorts, halter with little to halt, bright hair—a nymphet, by Pan!” This compares the little girl’s beauty to that of a nymphet.</span></p>
February 3, 2024 at 12:09 am #92275
Mu SongParticipantLine 1: The sun made its usual run of the house = Personification
Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. = Metaphor
Line 7: I lurched and lunged = Alliteration
Line 8: bits of grass optically twittering = Personification
Line 14: Marion and Mabel = Alliteration
Line 24: Green Goat = Alliteration
Line 26: before the shadows snapped, and swung = Alliteration
Line 27: the sweat shirted driver = Alliteration
Line 29: I saw it glide downhill and disappear = Personification
Line 30: calm pale profile = AlliterationFebruary 3, 2024 at 7:08 pm #92290
Alyssa skerretParticipantLine 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripped into evening. = Simile
Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. = Metaphor
Line 6: <span style=”color: #000000; font-family: Tinos; font-size: medium;”>As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower. = Simile/Alliteration</span>
Line 7: Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun. = Personification
Line 8: I kept an eye on that section of the suburban street. = Alliteration
Line 22: <span style=”color: #000000; font-family: Tinos; font-size: medium;”>halter with little to halt,… = Alliteration</span>
Line 24: Green Goat = Alliteration
Line 28: With a flutter in my breast,.. = Metaphor
Line 29: I saw it glide downhill and disappear behind the corner of the house. = Personification
Line 31: I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile. = Alliteration
February 3, 2024 at 11:04 pm #92296
Andrew_RParticipantLine 2 – The dandelions had changed from suns to moons – metaphor
Line 5 – As I lurched and lunged – alliteration
Line 8 – bits of grass optically twittering – personification
Line 9 – A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – personification
Line 10 – but who could replace my lolita? – symbolism/motif
Line 14 – The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer – metaphor
Line 24 – Green Goat – alliteration
Line 28 – flutter in my breast – metaphor
Line 29 – sweat shirted driver – alliteration
Line 30 – pale profile – alliteration
February 4, 2024 at 2:14 pm #92303
MehrinisoParticipant1. Line 1- The sun made its usual round of the house- Personification
2. Line 1 – As the afternoon ripened into evening- Simile
3 Line 2 – Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons – Metaphor
4. Line 7 – As I lurched and lunged – Simile & Alliteration
5. Line 8 – Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun – Personification
6. Line 9 – It curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees, then sped towards us down, down, quite sharply – Metaphor
7. Line 12 – Disappeared behind our own front porch – Personification
8. Line 22 – Halter with little to halt – Alliteration
9. Line 24 – Green Goat – Alliteration
10. Line 25 – A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue – Personification
11. Line 28 – With a flutter in my breast – Metaphor
12. Line 30 – Pale Profile – AlliterationFebruary 7, 2024 at 6:34 pm #92483
Angel PadillaParticipantLine 1: The Sun made its usual round of the house (Personification)
Line 1: as the afternoon ripened into evening(Simile)
Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons(Metaphor)
Line 7-8: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun(Personification)
Line 8-9: section of suburban street(Alliteration)
Line 9: It curved in from under an archway of huge shade trees(Personification)
Line 26: shadows snapped(alliteration)
Line 27: sweat shirted(alliteration)
Line 28-29: with a flutter in my breast(Metaphor)
Line 29-30: I witnessed the return of the Blue Sedan. I saw it glide downhill and disappear behind the corner of the house.(Personification)
February 7, 2024 at 8:02 pm #92490
RafiParticipantLine 2. Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moon = Metaphor
line 1. The Sun made its usual round of the house = Personification
Line 7. I lurched and lunged = Alliteration
Line 8. bits of grass optically twittering = personification
Line 14. Marion and Mabel = Alliteration
Line 12. Disappeared behind our own front porch = Personification
Line 24. Green Goat = alliteration
Line 28. flutter in my breast = metaphor
Line 29. I saw it glide downhill and disappear = Personification
Line 30. pale profile = alliteration
February 8, 2024 at 8:32 pm #92548
Angel OrdonezParticipant<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 1 The sun made its usual round of the house – Personificantion</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 2 Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons. – METAPHOR</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 11 house and high-sloping – Alliteration</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 11 (much trimmer than ours) and disappeared behind – Personification</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>LINE 17 feeding from a paper bag, both talking at the top of their sunny voices. – METAHPOR</span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 24 Green Goat – Alliteration </span></p>
<p dir=”ltr” style=”line-height: 1.38; margin-left: -36pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt;”><span style=”font-size: 12pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: #000000; background-color: transparent; font-weight: 400; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;”>Line 26 roof before the shadows snapped, and swung by at an idiotic pace, – Personification</span></p>
February 8, 2024 at 8:36 pm #92549
Bryan JimenezParticipantLine 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons = Metaphor
Line 7: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun = Simile
Line 7: bits of grass optically twittering = Alliteration
Line 14: Two little girls, Marion, and Mabel, both talking at the top of their sunny voices = Personification
Line 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening = Metaphor
Line 22: a nymphet, by Pan! = Simile
Line 20: The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car = Alliteration
Line 25: A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade of the avenue = Personification
Line 26: sweat shirted driver roof-holding = Alliteration
Line 27: the junkman’s dog tearing alongside = PersonificationFebruary 8, 2024 at 9:58 pm #92560
TravisBowryParticipantLine 1: The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening. – personification
Line 2: Most of the dandelions had changed from suns to moons – metaphor
Line 25: and swung by at an idiotic pace – metaphor
Line 14: Two little girls, Marion and Mabel – alliteration
Line 24: Green Goat by the frontage of Mr. and Mrs. Humbert’s residence – alliteration
Line 7: As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower – alliteration
Line 7: As I lurched and lunged with the hand mower – simile
Line 30: I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile – metaphor
Line 13: A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – metaphor
Line 8: I kept an eye on that section of suburban street. – personificationFebruary 11, 2024 at 1:07 am #92603
Jennifer CParticipantLine 1 : The sun made its usual round of the house as the afternoon ripened into evening – personification
Line 4: bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun- alliteration
Line 7: with the smirk of one about to perform a good action- simile
Line 12: past old miss opposites ivied brick house and high-sloping lawn- alliteration
Line 14: The dandelions perished- personification
Line 16: Two little girls, marion and mabel, whose comings and goings- irony
Line 20: The fool dog of the prosperous junk dealer next door ran after a blue car not charlotte’s- alliteration
Line 23: ran back down the street crumpling her paper bag- imagery
Line 36: I had a glimpse of her calm pale profile- alliteration
Line 38: shadows snapped- personificationFebruary 22, 2024 at 6:55 pm #92881
NailaParticipantLine 1: As the afternoon ripped into the evening- metaphor
Line 4: It was crowded with dandelions – imagery
Line 9: There are some eructations that sound like cheers–at least, mine did. – simile
Line 15: Bits of grass optically twittering in the low sun – metaphor
line 21: A reek of sap mingled with the pineapple – personification
Line 22: whose comings and goings I had mechanically followed of late – metaphor
Line 25: Both talking at the top of their sunny voices – metaphor
Line 33: A station wagon popped out of the leafy shade – metaphor
Line 34: dragging some of it on its roof before the shadows snapped – metaphor
Line 39: her calm pale profile. – alliteration
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