- Introduction has a great opener by using a quote.
- Every paragraph has a sub topic
-Not every paragraph has 3 quotes.
- Smooth transitions into each paragraph from introduction to the first paragraph and so on.
- The introduction has a good thesis and its clear and strong
- The main theme is mentioned in every paragraph making the reader remember what the essay is about.
- There’s good grammar throughout the whole essay just needs a little adjustment
- The conclusion is well written and states all 3 sub topics
