English 1121 Journey

  1. Introduction has a great opener by using a quote.
  2. Every paragraph has a sub topic

-Not every paragraph has 3 quotes.

  1. Smooth transitions into each paragraph from introduction to the first paragraph and so on.
  2. The introduction has a good thesis and its clear and strong
  3. The main theme is mentioned in every paragraph making the reader remember what the essay is about.
  4. There’s good grammar throughout the whole essay just needs a little adjustment
  5. The conclusion is well written and states all 3 sub topics