Author Archives: giomara castillo

A Perfect World-Free write

Giomara Castillo

December 8th, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Free write

A Perfect World

     For me, a perfect world would be a world full of peace, where all the children would receive free education and won’t suffer from hunger. People would be more focused on what is really happening instead of believing everything on social media. A perfect world would be a clean world where peace would be the main religion. There won’t be homeless people or people that have to work more than two jobs to support their family. Everybody would be respectful, honest and won’t discriminate each other based on gender, color, and religion.

Debate points

Giomara Castillo

December 1st, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Debate points/Homework

 

  1. Abortion is a murder because life begins at conception, therefore, abortion would be taking the life of a human being away.
  2. No civilized society would permit one human to intentionally harm or take the life of another human without punishment.
  3. Adoption is an alternative to abortion. About 1.5 million American families want to adopt a child.
  4. Abortion can result in medical complications later in life. Future  Miscarries
  5. If a woman got pregnant due to rape or other circumstances abortion would not be an option. Abortion is punishing the unborn child who committed no crime.
  6. Abortion should not be used as another form of contraception.
  7. A woman should be responsible enough to prevent the risk of unwanted pregnancy through the use of contraception or abstinence.
  8. Tax money is used to fund abortions
  9. Many minors or young women that choose to abort would experience lifelong regrets
  10. Abortion causes psychological pain and stress

Summary of the essay”Five minds for the future” by Howard Gardne

Giomara Castillo

November 8,2015

Class 1101-D323

Summary

      In the essay “Five minds for the future” Howard Gardner describes the disciplinary mind which masters a way of thinking about a specific scholarly discipline. The synthesizing mind takes information and evaluates in a way to give the information a meaning. The creating mind puts forward new ideas, suggest creative ways of thinking and generates unexpected answers.The respectful mind differences between people and cultures and accepts them in a sympathetically and constructively way and the ethical mind is more abstract than the respectful mind and it’s more about meaning.

I Remember poem-Free write

Giomara Castillo

November 16, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Poem-I remember-Free write

I Remember

I remember telling my mother a story that changed her life forever.

I remember my father leaving us and not coming back

I remember seeing my mother struggle being a single mom

I remember getting bad grades and  mom taking my phone away.

I remember all the sleepless nights

I remember not telling the truth and getting in trouble.

I remember trying new foods and not liking it

I remember not wanting to remember.

Reporting Information Essay -Draft#2

Giomara Castillo

December 14,2015

Class 1101-D323

Research Essay-Draft#2

Making the Ultimate Choice

        “You can’t reconcile being pro-life on abortion and pro-death on the death penalty” as was stated by Tom Wright. Tom Wright is a leading British New Testament Scholar and retired Anglican bishop. Abortion is the deliberate termination of a human pregnancy, most often performed during the first twenty-eight weeks of pregnancy.While some feel that abortion should be illegal and restricted, others feel it should be legal and freely accessed. As a result, of this debate, two groups have emerged, the pro-life and pro-choice. Pro-life supporters claim that life begins at conception, therefore, abortion at any stage of pregnancy is murder. On the other hand, Pro-choice supporters claim that it is a woman’s right to choose what to do with her body. Abortion has been and always will be a controversial topic in terms of when life begins, religion, and politics.

      Everybody has a different point of view of when life really begins. Said,“The genetic material that leads to conception is alive but is wrong to say it has a unique human identity at conception. That is theology or philosophy”(Growe, Star). The question of when does life really begins is very controversial among those who believe in science and those who follow their religious traditions as well as  between Pro-life and Pro-choice supporters. Doctors make the decision of when life really begins based on the changes of survival meaning life begins when the fetus is able to survive outside the womb.. Nonetheless, the point at which a fetus is sufficiently developed to live outside the womb has come to be accepted as the national medical standard but technology plays a big role in this decision. In 1967, a fetus delivered under the age of twenty-eight  weeks could not survive on its own, in comparison to 1988, a fetus could survive on its own. at the age of twenty-two weeks. Perhaps because today technology and science make almost anything possible.

      “The fact that science has established without a shadow of a doubt that fetus and embryos are alive brings us no closer to understanding when life begins for ethical purposes” (Growe, Star). Pro-life supporters would agree with this statement because they believe that life starts at conception. On the other hand, Pro-choice supporters do not make absolute claims about when life begins they believe that the mother’s interest is the main priority.

      Religion sees abortion as the termination of an unborn life, therefore, abortion is wrong, sinful and immoral, nevertheless, there are some religious groups that support abortion. Individuals who are highly devoted to their religion oppose abortion, however, those who are not highly devoted support pro-choice. “The debates among abortion have served to polarize the Catholic community. The official policy of the Catholic church involves an extreme pro-life position”(Hoffmann, Johnson 162). Catholicism teaches that abortion is a form of murder, no matter the conditions or circumstances that led to pregnancy.The only exception would be if a medical procedure is needed due to the death of the embryo or undesired side effect of the fetus, other than that performing an abortion would be considered a sin. Hinduism is another religion that does not condemn abortion because it is thought to violate the religion’s teachings of nonviolence.

      Despite  being a controversial topic among some religions, there are other religious groups that somehow are in favor of abortion.“Other groups that have been perceived as maintaining a strong pro-life position, such as Southern Baptists and the Church of Brethren, have also experienced conflicts about abortion”(Hoffmann, Johnson,162) Nevertheless, a considerable number of religious organizations have shied away from the debate, arguing that although the moral concerns are formidable it is up to each person’s conscience to decide the proper course of action regarding abortion. Buddhism is a religion that has no official position on abortion, even though many oppose abortion in Japan, where there is a large Buddhist population, abortions are commonly practiced.

      Whether some people are in favor or against abortion, in terms of laws abortion is legal. Above all, there are also numerous amount of laws which affect abortions. “Since the passage of  Roe v. Wade in 1973, many legal challenges to abortion rights have been mounted.The 1992 decision Planned Parenthood v. Casey upheld the right to abortion”(Harper, Henderson and Carney 501). These two laws were passed in favor of abortion but, at the same time, it gave  states the right to enact restrictions. The decision, Roe v. Wade not only made abortion legal but also set a legal precedent that relied on the timing of the abortion by establishing trimesters during which the strength of government interest engages at increasing levels. The court ruled that during the first trimester of pregnancy, a woman has an absolute right to an abortion and the government can not interfere with that right. During the second trimester, the woman still has the right to an abortion but the state can get involved in order to protect the woman’s health. In the third trimester, the court decided that the state has the right to protect the life of the unborn if it so chooses.

      Lindsey, Sigillo, and Miller  stated,“The U.S Supreme court currently upholds a minor’s right for abortion, albeit with limitations, such as requiring parental notification or consent”(Lindsey, Sigillo and Miller 59). Most states require parental consent or notification for minors but provide the option of seeking a court order exempting minors from the requirement. “As of 2009, eighteen states require one-parent consent, two states require two-parent consent, ten states require one-parent notification and one state requires two-parent notification” (Lindsey, Sigillo and Miller 59). These states also have abortion restrictions and regulations that include waiting periods and counseling topics, such as showing women sonograms or other images showing the development of the fetus and insurance restrictions.

      Even though abortion is legal, the government has decided the cost of an abortion to be limited, “The federal Medicaid program pays for abortion only for life endangerment, incest or rape as required by the Hyde Amendment in 1977. Only 18 states cover abortion under Medicaid for reasons beyond rape, incest, and life endangerment” (Harper, Henderson and Darney 502) Poor woman would be affected by this decision and would be forced to perform an abortion in a clinic that is poorly educated in how to perform abortions for a low cost.

      In conclusion, when life actually begins remains a debate. Science believes that life begins when the fetus can survive outside the womb, Pro -life supporters believe that life begins at the moment of conception and abortion would be a murder and Pro -choice supporters don’t have an argument about when life actually begins they are more concerned on women’s rights. Some religions consider abortion as a sin since  they believe is the termination of an unborn life, however, there are other religious groups that argue that although the moral concerns are formidable it is up to each person’s conscience to decide the proper course of action regarding abortion. And even though abortion is legal in the United States, abortion laws continue to be a topic of debate in politics and among the religious group. Not only because minors need parental consent to perform abortions or because Medicaid does not cover the cost of an abortion but because individual differences, such as religious affiliation, can influence an individual’s support for abortion and abortion laws.

Works Cited

“Abortion, Information & the Law: What Every Doctor Needs to Know.” Issues in Law & Medicine 16.3 (2001): 283-84. ProQuest. Web. Nov. 2015.

Harper, Cynthia C., Jillian T. Henderson, and Philip D. Darney. “Abortion In The United States.” Annual Review of Public Health 26 (2005): 501-10. ProQuest. Web. Nov. 2015.

Hoffmann, John P, and Sherrie Mills Johnson. “Attitudes Toward Abortion among Religious Traditions in the United States: Change Or Continuity.” Sociology of Religion 66.2 (2005): 161-82. ProQuest. Web. Nov. 2015.

Lindsey, Samuel C., Alexandra E. Sigillo, and Monica K. Miller. “Attitudes Toward Parental Involvement Clauses In Minor Abortion Laws And Individual Differences In Religion, Political Affiliation, And Attribution Style Among College Students.” Individual Differences Research 11 (2013): 59-69. Academic Search Complete [EBSCO]. Web. Nov. 2015.

Partner’s Peer Review – Kevin Saltos

Giomara Castillo

December 8th, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Peer editing-Research paper

Opener:

“You can’t continue to have a higher education tuition grow at a multiple of the rate of inflation” A college degree and experience is essential to a living quality life. But there is a big problem in the way of people that may want to start or continue college and that’s college tuition.

-The quote needs to be cited.

Thesis with three subtopics:

The high cost of tuition has a big effect on college students. It can lead them to dropping out, taking out loans, and not being able to pay back those loans.

Topic sentences for each subtopic and 3 subtopics:

1.There are many issues that can occur from high tuition. Dropping out of college is

one the biggest outcomes from the high cost of tuition.

  1. He doesn’t have a topic sentence for subtopic 2.

3.Student debt is another result from high tuition. If the tuition is high, but the

person wants to get a degree nothing can stop that person from wanting to get it.

He needs three sub-subtopics for each subtopic and a topic sentence for subtopic #2

Transitional phrases:

He could use more transitional phrases.

Grammar;

His grammar is good, however, he could go over his essay and correct some words that are repeated twice.

Quotes and citation:

He needs more quotes to support his ideas and he needs to cite his evidence.

Conclusion:

In conclusion, his essay is good is 4 pages long as required, he needs to organize his work cited page and use proper MLA style also he needs to organize his paragraphs and clarify his subtopics and add three sub-subtopics to each subtopic.

 

Summary of Research Documentary “Cave of forgotten dreams” by Werner Herzog

Giomara Castillo

November 29, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Homework/ Summary

The documentary “Cave of forgotten dreams” by Werner Herzog is about a cave discovered in Southern France. This documentary addresses a primitive cave covered with the world’s oldest paintings. Herzog  examines the artwork created by our ancient ancestors around 32,000 years ago. He tries to find out about what these humans would have been like along  with  historians and scientists. Herzog also discusses how the artwork represents humanity’s earliest dreams. He concludes that these humans tried to make all the paintings realistic by adding more legs to the animal paintings to create a sense of movement.

Summary of “Despite Setbacks, Bloomberg Plan Has Made New York Greener” by Courtney Gross

Giomara Castillo

November 14, 2015

Class 1101-D323

Homework/ Summary

The essay entitled “Despite Setbacks, Bloomberg Plan Has Made New York Greener” by Courtney Gross addresses the environment. One term stated in the essay is disappointments or promises made the government that failed to be accomplished due to the lack of enthusiasm.Many plans had been proposed in order to keep the environment safe and clean, however most of these plans had been abandoned. another other term stated by the author was success, despite the failures and struggle to accomplish the plans proposed, the government was able to come up with new ideas substituted the failed plans. Lastly the term Moving to 2.0 was a version of PlaNYC to invite other environmentalists to encourage the administration to consider waste-to-energy facilities. In conclusion this essay was about ideas and plans proposed to maintain the environment clean, even though it was hard to keep the promises made most of the plans were able to be accomplished.

Summary of “From Doo Wop to Hip Hop: The Bittersweet Odyssey of African Americans in the South Bronx”

Giomara Castillo

November 8,2015

Class 1101-D323

Summary

     In the essay “From Doo Wop to Hip Hop: The Bittersweet Odyssey of African Americans in the South Bronx” Mark Naison discusses how a subculture can shift in the South Bronx as a result of a cultural movement. First Naison talks about the life of African Americans in South Bronx after World War II. Secondly Naison explains his experience living in South Bronx and lastly he talks about how hip hop music developed and influenced South Bronx. Naison uses Chantel’s “maybe “ to describe how the 1950’s were like, the expression of hip hop at that time showed the decent times and how there was no struggle in the Bronx but as time shifts to towards the 1970’s the Bronx becomes a social decay and everything reforms.