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The Story: One night 3 friends went out to the park. Two of them sat in the grass to talk and look at the stars, they were franky and lily. The other was David and he bought his telescope and was looking into the night sky. He saw something and adjusted to keep it in view. He goes back to Lily and Franky to tell them all about it and to follow him. Lily ask if she can see through the telescope and David allowed her to look through. She looks through the telescope and we get to see what David saw, a Comet that was passing by earths atmosphere.