Assignment #2: Suspends Story Story Revisions and New Roughs

After Feedback from Professor Zbigniew on my Thumbnails drawings , and limitations based on my drawing skills I decided to change to a much simpler storyline and setting.

 

 

StoryLine: In the old west, the year is 1890. Sherif Jones is investigating the robbery of a stage coach, that had happened a day earlier. while passing through town she comes across a suspicious character named Zac. They get into an altercation, till Maggie interrupts  pressing them with the stolen money, leaving them both confuse about the true identity of the the robber.

Characters:

Jones – Sherif

Zac – Suspect

Maggie: Zac’s wife / Possible actual coach robber.

Script:

EXT. MINING TOWN CIRCA 1890 – DAY

A tall and intimidating figure steps into a deserted dusty street. This is Sheif Jones.

He stares at a man leaning against a fence rail. This is Zac, a suspicious character with an eye patch.

JONES: I’m lookin’ for the man who robbed the stagecoach yesterday.

ZAC:  Don’t know nothin’ about it, Sheriff. Barber holds up a torn handkerchief.

JONES: This your handkerchief, son? You left it at the scene of the crime.

Zax straightens and walks out in front of the sheriff.

ZAC: You accusing me of burglary? Why, cause I’m dressed all in black and I got an eye patch? That’s discrimination.

Jones stares at Zac stupefied. The two men face off, their hands twitching beside the handles of their six shooters tucked in their holsters.

WOMAN: Hold it right there, boys!

The two men turn their heads to see, Maggie standing on a porch of a nearby building.

Zac: I can handle this, Maggie.

MAGGIE: You’re lookin’ for this ain’t ya, Sheriff?

Maggie tosses a bag into the street. It lands and tears, spilling silver coins into the dust. Sheriff Jones stares at the money.

JONES: How’d you come by this?

MAGGIE: I Guess I just found it. Maggie winks at Zac who looks at her dumfounded. She turns to go.

ANGLE ON Maggie’s wrist. She’s wearing the other half of the torn handkerchief. She turns and walks away leaving the two men staring mutely after her and one another.

Shot List

Shot #	Scene #	Short Description	Framing	Angle	Perspective	Action
1	1	A tall and intimidating figure steps into a deserted dusty street	WS	Low Angle	Two Point	Jones Walking to Scene
2	1	Sheriff Jones Spots a suspect	OTS Jones on Zac	Mild Shot	One Point	Looking over to Zac
3	1	Jones talking to Suspect (Zac)	OTS Zac on B	Mild Shot	One point	Jones Talking to Zac
4	1	Jones Accusing Zac of robbing the stage coach	CU Zac	Wide Shot	One Point	Jones Talking to Zac
5	1	Jones holds up hanky chip	CUB	Mild shot	One Point	Jones showing the evidence he found in the scene of the crime.
6	1	Zac straightens up and walk in front of Jones	WS	Mild shot	One Point	Zac Walking over to Jones
7	1	Jones Stares at Zac stupefied	FS	Wide Shot	One Point	Jones staring at Zac
8	1	The two men face off	OTS Jones on Zac	High angle close up	One Point	Face off between both men
9	1	Hands on guns tuck in holster	ECU HANDS ON GUN	Close up	Two Point	Hands on guns
10	1	Maggie calls out to the boys	OS	wide shot	One Point	Maggie calling out to the Boys
11	1	Both men turn their head to the direction of maggie	OTS Zac on Jones (Reverse)	close up	One Point	Turing of the heads in the direction of maggie
12	1	Maggie standing on the porch	WS	mild shot	One Point	Maggie standing on the porch
13	1	Rex to maggie “ i can handle this”	OTS Maggie on zac	wide shot	One Point	Rex talking to Maggie
14	1	Maggie talking to sheif	MS	mild shot	One Point	Maggie talking to the Jones
15	1	Maggie’s tosses a bag into the street	OTS Jones and maggie	close up	One Point	Maggie tosses the bag of coins
16	1	Spilling of coins into the street dust	ECU of bag	close up	One Point	Coins spilling on the street
17	1	Margaret looks at Zac who is Dumbfounded	CU	mild shot	One Point	Margaret looks over to Zac
18	1	Angle on Maggie Rest revealing the hankie chip	ECU of Wirst	close up	One Point	Maggie heading back in Salon

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