Opener: Johnathan has an opener with a quote

Thesis Statement w/ 3 subtopics: Johnathan has a thesis statement with 3 subtopics

3 Quotes from poem for each subtopics: Johnathan has 3 quotes for each subtopic but didn’t state from which line in the poem

Transitional Words/Phrase: Johnathan used transitional words in his essay

Grammar: Johnathan uses good grammar

Conclusion Restate thesis: Johnathan restated his thesis in the conclusion and also added his personal experience after reading this poem.