1. Opener: Nick has an opener

2. Thesis Statement/3 subtopic: Nick has three subtopic paragraphs

3. 3 subtopic paragraphs: Nick has three subtopic paragraphs

4. Topic sentence: Nick has a topic sentence

5. Transitional Phrase: Nick doesn’t have any transitional phrase

6. Grammar and conventions: Nick has some minor grammars

7. Conclusion with a thesis restated and lead out: Nick has a conclusion with his thesis stated and lead out