Argument: i have to make my argument more engaging so that the audience can have more interest in what I’m writing about
Structure: i need to make my paragraphs at least five paragraphs long. i should also learn to expand on my ideas.
Clarity: i need to be more clear with what i am trying to get across to the audience.
Revision: i find this the hardest since the writing being my own, it’s hard to tell what i did wrong. I have to proof read my writing several times in order to find my errors. I need to learn how to change things in my writing and to also find any grammar and punctuation mistakes that i may have done.
