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first draft Mid-term essay

Oscar Alonzo

English 2400 

October 22, 2020

Mid-term first Draft

“Rear Window” vs “It has to be murdered” comparison

“It must be Murder” is a short story composed by Cornell Woolrich, and “Rear Window” is its mirror film by Alfred Hitchcock. Both the short story and the film are clarifying a similar story of a lady that got killed by her husband, yet everyone has their own characters and style. They are both giving the crowds brief criticism of what truly occurred in that area. A portion of the characters of the film are “James Stewart as L.B. Jefferies and Raymond Burr as Lars Thorwald”. There are significant images in both the short story and the film. L.B. Jefferies’ camera is one of the most significant images in the film. Jefferies utilizes the camera for various destinations in the film. For instance, he takes pictures that can assist him with utilizing them as proof since he can’t stand up and go to Thorwald’s apartment. He likewise utilizes it to see plainly what is happening to his neighbor. 

There are many similarities and differences between the text and the film, one similarity is that Mr.Thorwald murders his wife and Jeff witnesses it by spying on the neighborhood. The second similarities is that Jeff’s injury is the same and reason to spy on the neighbor. The difference is that in the film, Jeff had Stella and Lisa. But in “It has to be murder” Jeff had a man named Sam to help him. Second difference is in “Rear window” he sends Lisa to go investigate Mr.Thorwald’s place. In “it has to be murdered” Mr. Boyne investigated Mr. Thorwalds’ place.

In conclusion, both the film and short story are like a mirror with minor changes in them. It shows how parts of the story can affect the mood/tone of the whole film from the text.

1 Comment

  1. Professor Sean Scanlan

    Oscar,
    Thanks for sharing your draft. As you lengthen and revise the essay, pay attention to:
    -Unfold Cahir’s definition in more detail, help readers visualize the precise reasons the film is the type of translation that you claim.
    -I suggest re-reading the story and watching the film again. I say this because J does not witness the murder–a key point that drives Boyne crazy in text and film. Be precise in all descriptions, terms, quotes, and summaries.
    -Select two or three key scenes to explore, then go deep rather than listing.
    -Add direct quotes to support you ideas; this will help move past listing and summarizing.
    -Best,
    Prof. Scanlan

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