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Midterm Essay (First Draft)

Rumana Shakur

English 2400

October 21st, 2020

Midterm Essay (First Draft)

 

Warning: Do NOT EAT Tita’s cooking

 

“Like water for chocolate” is an excellent sentimental story of an impossible passionate love during the Revolution in Mexico. The romance is trailed by the sweet smell of the kitchen secrets and cooking, with a creative mind and innovativeness. The story is that of Tita De La Garza, the most youthful of all little girls in Mother Elena’s home. As per the family tradition she is to watch after her mom till the day she dies, and subsequently can’t wed any men. Tita discovers comfort in cooking, and soon the kitchen turns into her reality, influencing each feeling she encounters to the individuals who taste her food. Almost as if she were casting spells on her food that only affects certain people. 

 

While the plot of the film version of “Like water for chocolate”(1992) is a Traditional transition to Laura Esquivel’s text version of “Like water for chocolate”(1989), there are a lot of similarities and differences. These differences and similarities give the readers and viewers different perspectives. For example, in the film it starts off with showing us Tita’s father’s death and why he had a heart attack which they showed a bit later on in the film. However in the text it starts with Tita’s very dramatic birth. In the film Tita’s birth was humorized compared to the text that states, where she came into the world in a “great tide of tears” which also symbolized Tita’s lifelong sadness that was awaiting her. The opening to the film and text were different, the tone and mood in the film and text were also very different. 

 

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In conclusion, people have different views and imagination. Every scene can not be imagined exactly the same by everyone. There are bound to be some differences. The mood and tone in a text or film can also drastically change the feel of a piece, which in “Like water for chocolate” did. The film had me getting mad and triggered at Pedro, Mama Elena and Rosaura. Sometimes accusing Tita of murder since her food seemed to have caused the deaths. But in the book it’s more personal, I’m more understanding of Tita and her feelings and the way she even cooks however in the movies the aspect of cooking was not even close to the sensation. 

1 Comment

  1. Professor Sean Scanlan

    Rumana,
    Thanks for sharing your draft. It is a strong beginning. The outline is hazy and so that will need more work. As you refine and revise the essay, pay attention to:
    -Unfold Cahir’s definition in more detail, help readers visualize the precise reasons the film is the type of translation that you claim.
    -Add direct quotes to support you ideas; this will help move past listing and summarizing.
    -My main piece of advice is to compare the similarities and differences of two key scenes in which Tita’s cooking is of high importance… perhaps the rose petal dish and the cake with tears in it?
    Best,
    Prof. Scanlan

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