Category: Unit 1

I’m writing about Bithiah‘s Ed Narrative

1. The writer effectively conveys their personal journey of adaptation and growth. By sharing their initial struggles and how they overcame them, they create a relatable narrative.
2. I like the use of vivid imagery

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Bithiah Boham “The power of sports”

1. The writer used self dialogue to demonstrate her emotions during the time of her scene. This allows readers to envision her character and emotions at the time. It gives much greater insight to the

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”The power of sports” by Bithiah Boham.
1. I Like how this author makes sure to describe everything so we get a full image of what happening. Like how she carefully described her schedule and the way her friend looked. …

Eve C ed narrative

1. I really liked how she used her home language in order to write what his dad told her. This added more feeling to her narrative because it gave me a vision of how that scene must

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“Proud African American” by Amadou Diallo

1. Amadou is Muslim African American who shared his story through resilience and between two worlds and how that influenced his academic life in NY school. He learned and embraced his culture along with adapting

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Meryam Abdullah “My real hero”

1- What caught my attention was the quote because she wrote it in her language which makes you want to know what that means and then she translated it. Meryam described the events of what …

Adrian Coree on “What Happens When You Apply Yourself?”

1. He made his sentences short but very informative, without writing too much and not missing important events. Also giving us the important background knowledge that comes together little by little.
2. As

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This is the analysis of Sangay Dolma’s education narrative. To start I think that this person does imagery extremely well, I can visualize the mountain where they had school and imagine what kind of life they lived. Secondly I can …

The student Example I have chosen to analyze was Adrian Corees’ essay about how words from a teacher he admired inspired him to apply himself in his school work and other aspects of his life. In his essay, Adrian does …

1. Eve uses great detail to describe an object that affects their life greatly, which I will use as well
2. Eve uses incredible dialogue to showcase conversations in different language to show the “Between Two Worlds”
3. Eve had great development by

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