My analyzation of student examples in specifically based on “Proud African Muslim” by Amadou Diallo.
- The first thing that caught my attention was her mentor quote. Her quote was spoken by her grandma, whom she admires very much, in a
Category: Unit 1
Analysis of Student Example-Christi
Bithiah Boham Ed Narrative
1.He didn’t use run on sentences.He went straight to point and had very specific descriptive details.
2.His paragraphs aren’t very long but gave specific scenes that correlate to his topic and don’t have details that don’t …
Analysis of Student Example – Davina
Meryam Abdullah Ed Narrative
- Meryam uses dialogue in her story to help readers visualize the scene in her story.
- Meryam gives plenty of concrete specific details so that readers can continue to understand what the story is about.
- Meryam had
Analysis of Student Example-Brianna M.
- Category: Adrian Coree âWhat Happens When You Apply yourselfâ.
- Â There was alot of dialogue in the reading.I will have a good amount of dialogue in my narrative to make it seem real.
- The reading made me feel like i
Analysis of Student Example â Amit Darmalingum
Adrian Coreeâ¨
- The essay includes specific details that make the narrative vivid. For example, the description of the tech office with shelves stocked with computer parts, the monitors displaying recordings, and the cramped workspace paints a clear picture for the
Analysis of Student Example â Said Babaev
“The Power of Sports” by Bithiah Boham
- A âfeel-good individual progression through sport’ tale. Although Bithiah struggled to transition, she succeeded when a space opened for her on the women’s volleyball team. These changes had spill-over effects that expanded into
Opening Ed Narrative-jennifer
One Saturday afternoon, I was in my room. Since my mother and I don’t have a great relationship, I tend to isolate myself. I mostly stay in my room and occasionally go out with my boyfriend. The only times I …
opening for Ed narrative-Maria Contreras
âI donât know why you choose AP English because you are not in the level of this classâ words that in that moment was one of the teachers I didnât like the most but now is the teacher i thank …
Opening for Ed Narrative- Carlos V.
There I was, grasping for air, feeling like my heart would pump its way out of my chest. It was another ordinary day outside of high school’s football field although after sprinting for 20 minutes my body began to give …
Opening Ed Narrative-Christi
In the beginning of junior year,my boyfriend broke up with me. He was grieving the loss of his aunt which made us grew apart.I was so depressed.I stopped eating and spent entire days in bed. Whenever I tried to eat, …
