Analysis of Student Example – ZiXuan Wu

Eve uses great detail to describe an object that affects their life greatly, which I will use as well
Eve uses incredible dialogue to showcase conversations in different language to show the “Between Two Worlds”
Eve had great development by first listing the setting, “a freezing day on March” so the reader can get a picture of what they’re experiencing

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The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.

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The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share

The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.