- Category: Adrian Coree “What Happens When You Apply yourself”.
- There was alot of dialogue in the reading.I will have a good amount of dialogue in my narrative to make it seem real.
- The reading made me feel like i was there in real time with him.
- I like how there paragraphs werent overwhelming. When i go back and read my draft i tend to get a lil lost and overwhelmed because i think i have a little to much detail.
