My research question is “how athletes brains are unique, or advanced from the average human?” This topic interests me because I’m an athlete myself and I been through academics and sports and I have seen many athletes succeed and become amazing scholars. Even though I already know some details I wanna dig in more on why that information is legit. I was surprised how student athletes in college are more likely to have a higher grades than an average scholar. Imagine having such a strict schedule with practices and still manage to have a better gpa than others.
I already know that athletes brains have thicker cortical in specific areas which makes it unique. A cortical is an outer layer of the cerebrum. In other words, they have a higher number of neurons. As I researched more about their brains studies have shown how their physical behavior tasks much better and faster than those with average brains. Brains of elite athletes are more efficient capable to respond more quickly and rapidly due to there physical performance according to “MARQUETTE UNIVERSITY LAW SCHOOL” on the article for “Do Athletes Have Better Brains Than the Rest of US?”
Here are two sources that I have found:
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8374331
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To conduct your research, you will consult a variety of print and non-print genres: newspaper and journal articles, interviews, documentaries, songs, poems, government reports, etc. You will use reliable journalism including The New York Times (free subscription with your CUNY email – we signed up at the beginning of semester), The Washington Post, The Wall Street Journal, The Economist, The Guardian. You will use news or university videos (ex Univ of Chicago), ted talks, podcasts, or interviews. You may also use creative art forms. (We will talk about genre awareness together.)